Michigan-By Eden

This summer I went to Wequetonsing, Michigan. Every year we go to Michigan to visit all my cousins. Usually my grandma and grandpa come also, but my grandpa had a kidney transplant so they could not come this year. A kidney transplant is when you have to get your old kidney taken out and get your new kidney put in. It only took my grandpa a week to get on the new kidney waiting list when usually it takes about 2 years. This time I was really sad when I found out the could not come but I still had a lot n.of fu

In michigan it was super cold because they had a very very bad winter so I only got to swim on one of the days. I sail at a place called Little Traverse Yacht Club it is in the town of harbor springs. I sailed almost everyday, which was awesome except for the fact that there was almost no wind for most of the days. In sailing I am in seamen first which is the last of the seamen levels.

There are 8 kids  in all which is kind of chaotic in one house. In the house there is a girl’s dormitory and a boy’s dormitory, so all the girl cousins share a room and all the boy cousins share a room. there’s also a room in between the boys and the girls dormitory which is the ballet and gaming and reading room where everyone hangs out. I had a really awesome time in michigan this year.

 

2 thoughts on “Michigan-By Eden

  1. This paragraph makes me want to go to Michigan right now. This was a very descriptive paragraph but one thing I would improve is just some grammar fixes, I make a lot of mistakes too. I love how you didn’t rush through your paragraph. Overall this piece was well done and I hope you enjoyed your trip!

  2. Thanks Alex,
    I really try to be descriptive. I will try to work on the grammar that I use. I will look at your blog and write a comment.

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