Scary Story by Quinn

Doom of the Goblins

 At home, two brothers Max and Paul were preparing to go Trick or Treating.  Max and Paul both got tons of candy.  They walked down Statue Avenue to get home when they saw something that they would never forget…

 A bunch of goblins were looking at them. The goblins had yellow fangs, were about two and a half feet tall and had green faces. Max and Paul screamed louder than ever.  Then the brothers saw a goblin bigger than the others.  He grunted something to the other goblins.  The goblins started advancing on them.  The chanted something that sounded like a battle cry.  Max and Paul started running the other way.  But they froze when they saw more goblins surround them.  Then the goblins started to close in all the while chanting that awful battle cry.  Once they got so close that the brothers could have touched them.  In fact one of them tried to grab Paul’s arm but Paul punched him in the face.  The hand had felt very slimy and globby.

 Trying to move north, south, east, and west but there was no escape and the goblins moved to intercept them.  Then they remembered that Max had a cell phone.  Dialing 911 the police answered. Max told them what happened.

 One minute later the goblins thankfully disappeared when the police came.  Max and Paul were escorted home where they ate their wonderful candy.  Of course no one believed them and they never forgot that night.  But every halloween they felt a strange feeling in themselves…

 

2 thoughts on “Scary Story by Quinn

  1. Nice work Quinn,
    It was very well made. You could have been a little clearer with your word choice, but overall it was well done. I also like how it ends with the line “But every Halloween they felt a strange feeling in themselves…” it is a very good cliffhanger. It makes the reader want to read more.

  2. Diego,
    Thank you for commenting on my scary story. I think it will be very helpful in the future.
    From Quinn

Leave a Reply

Your email address will not be published. Required fields are marked *