The Scarred Man By Zacharias

In the fog of London, England there was a prowler that lost his left eye in a knife fight and he also had scars all over his right leg .

 This man was looking for somebody to take his next victim to take hostage. In London there was a little boy and he lived with with both of his parents. On a Tuesday night the little boy’s parents went out to dinner and  they left the boy at the house. That night the one eyed man went into the vicinity of the house.

 The prowler went into the house and he opened the door and saw the boy sleeping in the bedroom. He crept silently towards the boy. The boy pretended to be asleep so acted fast and jumped out of bed and ran out of the building. The scarred man was shocked by the boys quickness.  The boy ran all the way to the place that his parents were having dinner that was just a few blocks down the street.

Now the strangler was scared and he ran out of the house and tried to catch up with boy and get him again but he lost the boy at the next ally. The boy went into the place where his parents were having dinner and told them that a scarred man almost grabbed him.

 The boy’s parents ran into the street where they saw a uniformed police officer. The scarred man ran out of an ally right towards them.  The police officer grabbed the scarred man and took him to prison. All of London was calm and quiet. The boy slept well that night.      

 

 

   

 

  

 

 

3 thoughts on “The Scarred Man By Zacharias

  1. I love your story because it has a lot of suspense and grabs your attention. Keep it up!

    Ezra, the 6th grade Davis Academy

  2. Comment on “The Scarred Man”
    This was a scary story and had me worried. I even looked out the window to see if the scarred man was there. I wish would have continued to when the man got out of jail. Overall it was a good story.

  3. I really liked your story. You put a lot of detail into it. I felt like I was the little boy. The details helped me imagine what he felt. Great story!

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