Halloween by Caidin
Brent Evans via Compfight
Halloween is coming round
All get ready to parade around town
Laughing and playing in the streets you hear an odd sound
Labels you check to make sure they’re still there
Old costumes combine to make new
Why oh why is it so fun, maybe because you get to eat candy all day long
Especially because you get to dress up
Even get an excuse to EAT CANDY lots of candy
Never will you go back again to not eating candy
Halloween by Caidin
You are a great writer and have a lot of potential. Also you are extremely descriptive when explaining something. Caidin continue what you are doing and you will definitely be successful in writing.
Very good poem but I got a little confused because on some parts you like the words didn’t rhyme but so far it was good.